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Stolen from ESPN; Harry Potter and the Corked Broom
Harry Potter and the Corked Broom
By Jim Caple
Readers around the globe will rely on TiVo to record "Stargate SG-1" tonight so they can line up outside their local bookstores for the midnight release everyone has been eagerly awaiting for three years -- the new Ichiro bobblehead doll.
Ha! Just kidding. They'll be lined up for the fifth book in the Harry Potter series, the 768-page, $29.95 "Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix." And what delights await readers inside its pages? No one knows for sure, because author J.K. Rowling and her publisher have gone to extraordinary lengths to keep the plot secret. Not only are copies being kept under lock and key, Rowling and Scholastic sued the New York Daily News for $100 million over the unauthorized publication of a section from a stolen edition.
Such measures couldn't stop Page 2's fearless staff, however, which obtained its own advance copy. And as the following chapter demonstrates, the modern world is creeping into Hogwart's as the teenage wizards grow a little older and deals with that other little bit of magic we Muggles call puberty ...
Chapter Five: The Broken Broom
Harry rose from his knees and held the Snitch triumphantly high above his head for all to see. After his miraculous Quidditch match-winning catch and stunning crash, Harry expected to receive a thunderous ovation, so he was surprised when he heard not a single clap, not even from his fellow Gryffindor housemates. Instead, their reaction was similar to his own that day over the summer when he discovered Dudley prancing about in Aunt Petunia's knickers. What a curious sight that had been!
Now, the entire Quidditch crowd stared silently at Harry and the Nimbus 2000 that lay broken around him.
"Look! Cork!" Draco Malfoy shouted, cruely snuffing out his hand-rolled cigarette on the reproductive organs of a small white bunny that had misfortunately hippity-hopped within his reach. "Potter corked his broom! That's why he's able to fly it so fast! He cheats!"
"What?!? I did no such thing," Harry cried and turned around to see to his horror that the broken pieces indeed revealed a cork interior to the broom. He looked back helplessly as Professor Dumbledore and the rest of the Hogwart's faculty strode toward him.
If you look closely, you can see where they drilled the hole.
"And what do you have to say for yourself, Mr. Potter?" Professor McGonagall asked in the sort of accusing tone obtained only after decades of sexual abstinence spent in a stiflingly repressive English public school.
"I don't know how it could have gotten there," Harry howled. "All I know is that I didn't put it there."
"Perhaps you accidentally picked up the wrong broom," Hagrid offered lamely. "Maybe you mistakenly picked up yer B.P. broom because you likes to put on a show fer fans before the match."
Harry's mouth dropped open, revealing his horrible dentistry as Dumbledore shot Hagrid the sort of withering look that only someone who has endured a life of low pay tutoring the pampered offspring of rich, thankless and self-satisfied parents is capable of. "You've said an astounding amount of idiotic things in your time at Hogwart's, but that is the dumbest thing you've ever said, Hagrid," Dumbledore scolded. "If you can't think of a more believable explanation I suggest you go back to the guardhouse before you get Harry in any further trouble. Now, bugger off!"
Hagrid grumbled something under his breath, let loose the most extraordinary fart and stomped away. Dumbledore waited until Hagrid was out of sight and his odor had finally drifted away before turning to face Harry.
"This is rather serious, I'm afraid," he said ponderously. "If you can't provide a logical explanation for how the cork got inside your broom, I'm afraid we shall have to suspend you for the next three matches."
"But I'll miss the match against Slytherin!" Harry sniveled.
"Can't be helped. It's what comes of cheating," Professor McGonagall snapped, with the sort of reproving tone gained only from a life spent in a subservient role in a male-dominated academic system. "I'm very disappointed in you. This places all your Quidditch achievements into doubt. Now, clean up your mess and return to your room."
Hermione and Ron rushed to Harry as he began to pick up the pieces and examined the cork.
"Wow, Harry! I never would have guessed that you would cork your broom!" Ron exclaimed, picking his nose. "I guess it just goes to show you how clueless I am! Sometimes I'm surprised I even remember to go to the bathroom without wetting myself. In fact, now that I look at my fly, I can see that I didn't. Fancy that!"
"Don't be such a silly git, Ron! You know Harry wouldn't do such a thing," Hermione said, then gave him a friendly hug while wishing she could do so much more. "But Harry. How do you think the cork got into your broom?"
"Someone must have placed a magic spell on it," Harry bawled.
"But who could do such a thing?" Ron asked, sniffing his armpit.
"Honestly, Ron, you are as thick as figgy pudding! We've only attended a school for wizards for five years -- it could be one of hundreds!" Hermione said, then kissed him sympathetically on the cheek and felt an odd (but pleasant) tingling in the private area of her body that We Must Not Name. "Who do you think did it, Harry?"
Harry pushed his glasses up on his nose to get a better look at Hermione's full red lips, but for some reason he could only picture Tony Curtis and Laurence Olivier in "Spartacus" instead.
"I'm certain it was Malfoy," Harry whimpered. "He knew Slytherin couldn't win if I played, so he put the cork in my broom so that I would get suspended."
"That would be just like him," Hermione said. "He's been taking anabolic steroids and human growth hormone all term to get ready for that match, so I wouldn't put anything past him."
"Steroids!" Ron yelled in excitement, wetting himself again. "How do you know?"
"I've felt the acne on his back with my own fingertips!" Hermione retorted breathlessly, then turned crimson in embarrassment. "Errr, I mean, I'm told he has acne on his back. I've never actually seen it. And I certainly haven't touched it. I mean, really. Ewwwwww, gross!"
There was an awkward silence as Harry thought of Draco's back, and Ron looked jealously at Hermione while digging a fingernail of wax from his ear.
"Anyway," Hermione said, nervously fingering her wand. "If it's true about Malfoy and the cork, there's only thing we can do."
"Right," Harry sniffed, wondering whether the corked broom would damage his 90 million galleon endorsement deal with Nimbus. "We'll have to kill him."
So here's the thing everyone's wondering about; who's going to die? (I love![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
katemonkey's suggestion. Number nine on the list of ways to amuse yourself at midnight release parties: "Sit quietly and politely reading, then, halfway through the book, suddenly shout out "Oh My God! [insert character that seems to have the most popularity in the crowd] died!" When people attempt to correct you, point at the text and swear over and over again that it's true. " BWA.
Honestly, I don't even consider the fact that someone's going to die to be a spoiler; I consider it friggin' common sense, really. Voldemort has risen, he never had a problem with killing people before, and we have three books to go. I think it's nuts to believe that only one person is going to die before this is over. A lot of people seem to be worried about Ron. (I am dork, for I am so proud of the little guy for making Quidditch team! Note to self: seek professional help.) I'm not really worried about Ron or Hermione, really. (Or Harry. Cuz. Duh.) For the last book, I'll get a little itchy, but RonHarryHermione is such an integral part of the status quo that I just can't see that changing unless it's to provoke some Big Dramatic Moment of Truth type thing, and this seems to early. Watch me be proved wrong tomorrow but for now this is my thought.)
This time I am going to be damn careful about leaving my bookmark in. When I read Goblet of Fire, I was flipping through, trying to find my page, and got too far ahead when my eyes fell upon "Cedric was lying spread-eagled on the ground. He was dead." I wasn't incredibly attached to Cedric so it wasn't the worst thing to be spoiled for, but it still kinda sucked.
Now is where I would calculate different characters' odds of dying, but a) I haven't really thought that hard about it and b) I don't know how to calculate odds. I remember being worried for McGonagall before the last book. Dunno why. I hope Hagrid doesn't bite it yet, because I can definitely see him dying at some point. Sniff. I hope I'm wrong about that.
I've heard some criticisms about the length of the book, but I'm going to hold off on any pronouncements of book bloat just yet. If the story that J.K. Rowling has to tell takes 800+ pages, well, I wouldn't want any necessary parts to be cut just because it's "too long." We'll see. I wasn't irritated by Goblet of Fire's length, though if I look back as a nitpicker there are things I would cut. (SPEW? I don't think it was really necessary just to bring house elves into the forefront. Probably there are other things but I don't feel like nitpicking just for the sake of it; let's hear it for being lazy, easily-satisfied fans! ;)
I hope Walden Books actually has fun stuff planned other than staying open late to sell the book. I know Barnes & Noble has parties going on, but I pre-ordered from WB out of nostalgia for the last one as well as the 10% frequent buyer discount. w00t! Turns out I don't have work tomorrow, just Sunday, so I can stay up late reading and sleep in and read some more and then get slightly sloshed with friends. Man, it'll suck driving home with the book burning a hole on my passenger seat. Perhaps I should strap a seatbelt around it for safety; what if I got in an accident and it went flying out the window? Horrors!
It's sick how I'm slowly edging into the HP fandom. (Maybe it's a summer thing...last year I got a strange yet to re-read all of the books in a row and then search for fic, though I found nothing good.) I am reading some fic now, mostly After the End, but I'm open to recommendations. And I could see myself writing a short story or two if I got a particular idea. Nothing epic though, please. (And I still go "meh" to Cassie Claire's fic and the Paradigm of Uncertainty. In fact, to that I go "meh" and blow raspberries.)
So yeah. Harry Potter coming out tonight. Am refusing to feel shame about being one in a huge herd of drooling mainstream fen. Am going "squee!" instead. Am talking likexmrgordox! Am now very much missing sache and the other Socks who are probably having a dorky goofy fun dinner right now. Am now going to stop writing this entry before it becomes sentient and decides to attack Tokyo.
By Jim Caple
Readers around the globe will rely on TiVo to record "Stargate SG-1" tonight so they can line up outside their local bookstores for the midnight release everyone has been eagerly awaiting for three years -- the new Ichiro bobblehead doll.
Ha! Just kidding. They'll be lined up for the fifth book in the Harry Potter series, the 768-page, $29.95 "Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix." And what delights await readers inside its pages? No one knows for sure, because author J.K. Rowling and her publisher have gone to extraordinary lengths to keep the plot secret. Not only are copies being kept under lock and key, Rowling and Scholastic sued the New York Daily News for $100 million over the unauthorized publication of a section from a stolen edition.
Such measures couldn't stop Page 2's fearless staff, however, which obtained its own advance copy. And as the following chapter demonstrates, the modern world is creeping into Hogwart's as the teenage wizards grow a little older and deals with that other little bit of magic we Muggles call puberty ...
Chapter Five: The Broken Broom
Harry rose from his knees and held the Snitch triumphantly high above his head for all to see. After his miraculous Quidditch match-winning catch and stunning crash, Harry expected to receive a thunderous ovation, so he was surprised when he heard not a single clap, not even from his fellow Gryffindor housemates. Instead, their reaction was similar to his own that day over the summer when he discovered Dudley prancing about in Aunt Petunia's knickers. What a curious sight that had been!
Now, the entire Quidditch crowd stared silently at Harry and the Nimbus 2000 that lay broken around him.
"Look! Cork!" Draco Malfoy shouted, cruely snuffing out his hand-rolled cigarette on the reproductive organs of a small white bunny that had misfortunately hippity-hopped within his reach. "Potter corked his broom! That's why he's able to fly it so fast! He cheats!"
"What?!? I did no such thing," Harry cried and turned around to see to his horror that the broken pieces indeed revealed a cork interior to the broom. He looked back helplessly as Professor Dumbledore and the rest of the Hogwart's faculty strode toward him.
If you look closely, you can see where they drilled the hole.
"And what do you have to say for yourself, Mr. Potter?" Professor McGonagall asked in the sort of accusing tone obtained only after decades of sexual abstinence spent in a stiflingly repressive English public school.
"I don't know how it could have gotten there," Harry howled. "All I know is that I didn't put it there."
"Perhaps you accidentally picked up the wrong broom," Hagrid offered lamely. "Maybe you mistakenly picked up yer B.P. broom because you likes to put on a show fer fans before the match."
Harry's mouth dropped open, revealing his horrible dentistry as Dumbledore shot Hagrid the sort of withering look that only someone who has endured a life of low pay tutoring the pampered offspring of rich, thankless and self-satisfied parents is capable of. "You've said an astounding amount of idiotic things in your time at Hogwart's, but that is the dumbest thing you've ever said, Hagrid," Dumbledore scolded. "If you can't think of a more believable explanation I suggest you go back to the guardhouse before you get Harry in any further trouble. Now, bugger off!"
Hagrid grumbled something under his breath, let loose the most extraordinary fart and stomped away. Dumbledore waited until Hagrid was out of sight and his odor had finally drifted away before turning to face Harry.
"This is rather serious, I'm afraid," he said ponderously. "If you can't provide a logical explanation for how the cork got inside your broom, I'm afraid we shall have to suspend you for the next three matches."
"But I'll miss the match against Slytherin!" Harry sniveled.
"Can't be helped. It's what comes of cheating," Professor McGonagall snapped, with the sort of reproving tone gained only from a life spent in a subservient role in a male-dominated academic system. "I'm very disappointed in you. This places all your Quidditch achievements into doubt. Now, clean up your mess and return to your room."
Hermione and Ron rushed to Harry as he began to pick up the pieces and examined the cork.
"Wow, Harry! I never would have guessed that you would cork your broom!" Ron exclaimed, picking his nose. "I guess it just goes to show you how clueless I am! Sometimes I'm surprised I even remember to go to the bathroom without wetting myself. In fact, now that I look at my fly, I can see that I didn't. Fancy that!"
"Don't be such a silly git, Ron! You know Harry wouldn't do such a thing," Hermione said, then gave him a friendly hug while wishing she could do so much more. "But Harry. How do you think the cork got into your broom?"
"Someone must have placed a magic spell on it," Harry bawled.
"But who could do such a thing?" Ron asked, sniffing his armpit.
"Honestly, Ron, you are as thick as figgy pudding! We've only attended a school for wizards for five years -- it could be one of hundreds!" Hermione said, then kissed him sympathetically on the cheek and felt an odd (but pleasant) tingling in the private area of her body that We Must Not Name. "Who do you think did it, Harry?"
Harry pushed his glasses up on his nose to get a better look at Hermione's full red lips, but for some reason he could only picture Tony Curtis and Laurence Olivier in "Spartacus" instead.
"I'm certain it was Malfoy," Harry whimpered. "He knew Slytherin couldn't win if I played, so he put the cork in my broom so that I would get suspended."
"That would be just like him," Hermione said. "He's been taking anabolic steroids and human growth hormone all term to get ready for that match, so I wouldn't put anything past him."
"Steroids!" Ron yelled in excitement, wetting himself again. "How do you know?"
"I've felt the acne on his back with my own fingertips!" Hermione retorted breathlessly, then turned crimson in embarrassment. "Errr, I mean, I'm told he has acne on his back. I've never actually seen it. And I certainly haven't touched it. I mean, really. Ewwwwww, gross!"
There was an awkward silence as Harry thought of Draco's back, and Ron looked jealously at Hermione while digging a fingernail of wax from his ear.
"Anyway," Hermione said, nervously fingering her wand. "If it's true about Malfoy and the cork, there's only thing we can do."
"Right," Harry sniffed, wondering whether the corked broom would damage his 90 million galleon endorsement deal with Nimbus. "We'll have to kill him."
So here's the thing everyone's wondering about; who's going to die? (I love
katemonkey's suggestion. Number nine on the list of ways to amuse yourself at midnight release parties: "Sit quietly and politely reading, then, halfway through the book, suddenly shout out "Oh My God! [insert character that seems to have the most popularity in the crowd] died!" When people attempt to correct you, point at the text and swear over and over again that it's true. " BWA.Honestly, I don't even consider the fact that someone's going to die to be a spoiler; I consider it friggin' common sense, really. Voldemort has risen, he never had a problem with killing people before, and we have three books to go. I think it's nuts to believe that only one person is going to die before this is over. A lot of people seem to be worried about Ron. (I am dork, for I am so proud of the little guy for making Quidditch team! Note to self: seek professional help.) I'm not really worried about Ron or Hermione, really. (Or Harry. Cuz. Duh.) For the last book, I'll get a little itchy, but RonHarryHermione is such an integral part of the status quo that I just can't see that changing unless it's to provoke some Big Dramatic Moment of Truth type thing, and this seems to early. Watch me be proved wrong tomorrow but for now this is my thought.)
This time I am going to be damn careful about leaving my bookmark in. When I read Goblet of Fire, I was flipping through, trying to find my page, and got too far ahead when my eyes fell upon "Cedric was lying spread-eagled on the ground. He was dead." I wasn't incredibly attached to Cedric so it wasn't the worst thing to be spoiled for, but it still kinda sucked.
Now is where I would calculate different characters' odds of dying, but a) I haven't really thought that hard about it and b) I don't know how to calculate odds. I remember being worried for McGonagall before the last book. Dunno why. I hope Hagrid doesn't bite it yet, because I can definitely see him dying at some point. Sniff. I hope I'm wrong about that.
I've heard some criticisms about the length of the book, but I'm going to hold off on any pronouncements of book bloat just yet. If the story that J.K. Rowling has to tell takes 800+ pages, well, I wouldn't want any necessary parts to be cut just because it's "too long." We'll see. I wasn't irritated by Goblet of Fire's length, though if I look back as a nitpicker there are things I would cut. (SPEW? I don't think it was really necessary just to bring house elves into the forefront. Probably there are other things but I don't feel like nitpicking just for the sake of it; let's hear it for being lazy, easily-satisfied fans! ;)
I hope Walden Books actually has fun stuff planned other than staying open late to sell the book. I know Barnes & Noble has parties going on, but I pre-ordered from WB out of nostalgia for the last one as well as the 10% frequent buyer discount. w00t! Turns out I don't have work tomorrow, just Sunday, so I can stay up late reading and sleep in and read some more and then get slightly sloshed with friends. Man, it'll suck driving home with the book burning a hole on my passenger seat. Perhaps I should strap a seatbelt around it for safety; what if I got in an accident and it went flying out the window? Horrors!
It's sick how I'm slowly edging into the HP fandom. (Maybe it's a summer thing...last year I got a strange yet to re-read all of the books in a row and then search for fic, though I found nothing good.) I am reading some fic now, mostly After the End, but I'm open to recommendations. And I could see myself writing a short story or two if I got a particular idea. Nothing epic though, please. (And I still go "meh" to Cassie Claire's fic and the Paradigm of Uncertainty. In fact, to that I go "meh" and blow raspberries.)
So yeah. Harry Potter coming out tonight. Am refusing to feel shame about being one in a huge herd of drooling mainstream fen. Am going "squee!" instead. Am talking like
xmrgordox! Am now very much missing sache and the other Socks who are probably having a dorky goofy fun dinner right now. Am now going to stop writing this entry before it becomes sentient and decides to attack Tokyo.
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*smiles contentedly as a stuffed pig does*
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Are very loved?
Eh. Grammar immaterial. Pig loved.
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